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Post  princess82 on Sun Feb 19, 2012 2:53 am

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Post  OpRise on Mon Feb 20, 2012 10:02 pm

Interesting! The language here just drops off your tongue so smooth. Like your use of repetition and rhythm. Welcome!
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Post  KindOfBlue06 on Tue Feb 21, 2012 10:17 pm

I like this. Good flow and delicate imagery.

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