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The INFP Writers Society

A community dedicated to those INFP personality types who enjoy the art of writing and wish to further their talents through friendly discussion and critique!


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Post  princess82 Tue Feb 21, 2012 9:38 pm

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Post  studentofrhythm Wed Feb 22, 2012 1:22 pm

I find this very, very effective in its brevity.
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Post  adverseaffects Wed Feb 22, 2012 4:44 pm

Oh, I LOVE that last couplet. At first I was all, "cute, cars on mars, what, are we intjs now?" The last couplet actually surprised me and brought it all together, I had that oh! moment that makes you like a poem. Good job, bravo bravo cheers
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